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To seek an end to time itself
That such a moment as this
Could be forever frozen
The leaf fall stilled
In midair freefall
Early frosts bade to spare
The bounty heavy laden
Fixed upon the apple trees
As seasons turn and turn again

Yet there is to be no cessation
Of the trickling stream of sand
Flowing forward endlessly
Taking all that I have ever known
Reshaping and unstitching
Every dream I ever had
Each fragment passing beyond my reach
A realisation that this too shall pass
But nothing could inspire me more

For until the earth stops
Whirling around our flaming sun
In an ever expanding universe
My passion and fervour for truth
Keeps my focus on the day
And when a veil is drawn
Upon the stage of life
With a firm willed smiling end
This film will fade to close.
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0-Carrion-0 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2007   Writer
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to keep in theme with your ending line: showstopping.
Bravo!!

I'd love to hear you read this stuff aloud. I bet it's as magic to the ear as it already is to the soul. :nod:
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mercurius11 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
I am so very Middle English you might end up covering your ears LOL

I sound like I should work for the BBC...!
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0-Carrion-0 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2007   Writer
Tsk, that's perfect.
Y'know, I grew up on Dr. Who, Monty Python, Alo Alo, Mr. Bean... and the like. I now officially wish I was a dashing Patrick McGoohan trying to escape a place called the Village while not giving up any information regarding my resignation. :paranoid:

Yes. I'm sure I'm trying to say I have a thing for the accent.
And now I've said too much.
:sprint:
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mercurius11 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, the accent! I am really too English for words, best you just give up trying to escape now really ;-)

You are a number, after all... :evillaugh:
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0-Carrion-0 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2007   Writer
I will not be pushed, filed, stamped, indexed, briefed, debriefed, or numbered.
My Life Is My Own!
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mercurius11 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, come now, you know I own you. Why, i've got your DNA sequence right here on my pc...

;-)
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0-Carrion-0 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2007   Writer
lmfao....!!!!

It's funny, really... to come across a comment like this---especially after having forgotten what I'd said previously. :lmao:

...and of course this ruins any chance of me responding back further in narrative.
Grawr! This round goes to you.
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mercurius11 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
:boogie:
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abuseofreason Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
absolutely incredible. I don't know what else to say.
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mercurius11 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, thank you so much!
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